Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login

Mature Content

This content is intended for mature audiences.


or, enter your birth date.*


Month

Day

Year*
Please enter a valid date format (mm-dd-yyyy)
Please confirm you have reviewed DeviantArt's Terms of Service below.
* We do not retain your date-of-birth information.
For larger version and psd see my Patreon www.patreon.com/Stahlberg
Add a Comment:
 
:iconjomala:
I've critiqued for you before but I'm still not remotely qualified. And I'm in awe of the technical achievements here and the skill.

However, since you've asked, I've got three points that might be of interest.

- I love the texture as well as the detailed anatomy on him, but I'm slightly distracted by the brush strokes. I get that he's not the focus, and I don't think they'd be distracting if they were part of a background, nor of course if she also had them, but with him being close, it's a curious effect.

- The back wall looks like a blackboard. I understand that it needs to be dark and plain, but my mind keeps wondering what it is.

- I think that the story is meant to be "she got everything she asked for and more and now she's wondering if she can handle it". I think, despite the great work on face and pose and gaze, it's slipping towards "she should have been careful what she wished for and now the silly girl is going to die horribly and explicitly". I definitely prefer the former idea! If that was also what you were aiming for I think it would have helped he was in the circle (which I believe would suggest she still had some control), and also perhaps if she had only just sat back from the rite, rather than having apparently scrabbled backwards (suggesting again that all control is lost).

But I'm nitpicking. It's extremely impressive. Keep up the great work!
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
8 out of 10 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconxirix88:
Xirix88 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2017
No.  Wait.  This was just for fun.  I really didn't mean any of this.  I was just playing a game.  I . . . I . . .

Why are you staring at my vagina?
Reply
:iconcullyferg2010:
cullyferg2010 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2017
Well, she's in for it now!  And if she's a virgin, she won't be for long!
Reply
:iconnucicoms:
NuciComs Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Be careful what you wish for woman. You might get more than you can handle... :XD:
Reply
:iconsnifys:
snifys Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017
very beautiful
Reply
:iconsupahcabre:
SupahCabre Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
What's that stuff dripping from his fingers?
Reply
:iconstahlber:
stahlber Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
You know how scary aliens, monsters and demons are always covered in slime, because it makes them scarier and photographs well?  :)  I think in this case it might be some inter-dimensional goo from the transport, like in Poltergeist
Reply
:iconsupahcabre:
SupahCabre Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
Phew! I originally thought it was something very naughty, but my head is just stuck in the gutter.
Reply
:iconpiperstorm:
PiperStorm Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017
one kinda word: WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply
:iconshameless-sunset:
shameless-sunset Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2017
very nice scene
Reply
:icontheexitzero:
theexitzero Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2017
Great Image!
Reply
:iconmegatron888:
megatron888 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2017
what she looking at?
Reply
:iconazrael37:
Azrael37 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017
This is freaking awesome
Reply
:iconsoumakyo:
soumakyo Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017
"I KNEW I should have worn clothes for this ritual!" :D
very nice pic :)
Reply
:iconhotgum:
HotGum Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
very well done
Reply
:iconwarranty4:
Warranty4 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fabulous work on so many levels, from humour to the macabre. :)
Reply
:iconletmeseebeuty:
LETMESEEBEUTY Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017
Gorgeous and scary artwork 
I hope the young lady learns not to use the dark side of the force 
Reply
:iconmaycondss:
MayconDSS Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Incrível 
Reply
:iconbrandoch-daha:
Brandoch-Daha Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
She should be lighting those candles and re-setting that little circle, lickety-split!
Reply
:iconpsychocouac:
psychocouac Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017
I would like to leave a critique but I don't feel I'm skilled enough for that. I can only say that the composition is great. The image tells a full story and the eye is well guided from one character to the other (and then back to the first one) until the viewer sees the full scene and understand what happens.
Everything is perfect (as far as I can see) on a technical level. The characters look real, the anatomy is perfect. There is a wonderful opposition between warm and cold tones, also used to reinforce the transition from the foreground to the background. The precision of tight reflections on the girl skin makes the piece incredible.
I'm a big fan.
Reply
:iconjs2080:
JS2080 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
Cool!! 
Reply
:iconclassicalsalamander:
ClassicalSalamander Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just amazing! Her pose and expression are so perfect, and that red fire reflecting in her eyes... :love:
Reply
:iconseraf-501:
seraf-501 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
The great red dragon...
Well interpreted work!
Reply
:iconburnsidhe:
Burnsidhe Featured By Owner Edited Jan 11, 2017
I'm not sure I can critique this, because nothing stands out as being noticeably incorrect. It's beautifully posed, down to the way her toes are splayed. Maybe the big toe is bent a little too much, but it definitely gets across the feeling that she's aware she's summoned something *ahem* larger than she can handle easily.

One detail I love even though it's not at all obvious, is that his, ah, well.. he's glowing. Because I don't see any other source for the red light, and candles just aren't that bright. Another lovely touch is that she was so startled he appeared, she spilled the bowl of.. whatever that stuff is, and the candles toppled, which means he actually stepped back from her and out of the containment circle.

The subtle implication of that is that he's not.. actively.. hostile to her anyway.
Reply
:icondeepgrounduk:
deepgrounduk Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
stunning work :D
Reply
:iconjlvfr:
jlvfr Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
And the question now is: did the summoning well wrong... or well? ;)
Reply
:iconlukethenuke:
LukeTheNuke Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
It's gone horribly right!
Reply
:iconjlvfr:
jlvfr Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017
ROFL
Reply
:iconlukethenuke:
LukeTheNuke Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
Man, she is laser-focused on his crotch.
Reply
:icontubi4:
tubi4 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
Great work :la:
Reply
:iconlaspe:
Laspe Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful work... Her expression is priceless! :clap:
Reply
:iconblades-123:
Blades-123 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautifully done, great pose, expression, skin tones and lighting.:)
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×




Details

Submitted on
January 11
Image Size
645 KB
Resolution
978×900
Mature Content
Yes
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
7,934 (1 today)
Favourites
597 (who?)
Comments
31
Downloads
297

License

Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 3.0 License.
×