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After a long day of hard manual labor outdoors, time to go home and rest
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The start off, i am not the best artist/ critic, but i will give it my best shot.
As a whole, this how piece is amazing! Its drawn amazingly, the colors and lighting at the same time pop and are also very soft. And the girl is with realistic proportions and its not in a too sexual position.
Like the only things i can find a sort of negative, are her shadow (when i first saw it i though that it was mud, something about that color made me think that) and why is she on her tip toes, while she is sitting.
But again, as a whole this entire piece is amazing! Great work from the artist
PS. Sorry for my not good english :P
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Very nicely composed. The angle of the fishing pole and perspective is a little confusing, but at the same time further examination of it shows it's actually at a different angle pointing to one of the perspective points in the composition.
The tension in the elf's stretching is quite apparent from the pointed toes to the visibly tense tendon behind the knee; not all stretching is done with extension, sometimes it's done with contraction and it's obvious to me she's tensing her legs and arching her back.

Her proportions are very reasonable, though I can't help but feel her arms are a little short; this could be due to the fact her left hand is hidden behind grass, or perhaps the subtle bend in her left arm making it look like it is shorter than it is.

The lighting is nicely done, though I wonder if her face really should be entirely in shadow.
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niauropsaka Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017   Digital Artist
I like the pastel colours for the flowers.
b13visuals Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome! Really well done!
arrog Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2017
Very Nice.
darius44110 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2017
beautiful like a dream
Headviant Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Woo I love this :)
gerdahels Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
Sexy! Good idea
LETMESEEBEUTY Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016
Gorgeous and powerfully sexy artwork 
beautyliesintheeye Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016
Got beaten to the critique vantage point again! lol

Of course, nothing to say about the picture in terms of technicals. It's all there.
Proportions, equilibrium, hues and colors in harmony and contrast, light and shades to go.
But again, who'd be surprised here but to the contrary.

Now the subject is something else entirely. Quite apart from regular lines of interest. Or is it?
You see, this whole set-up reeks of... a set-up.
In fact, it's as if it all was some kind of metaphorical merry land where all points to something else and vice a versa... if you follow my meaningful gaze... ;-)

Pretty and fun. Ty for sharing.
kiayt Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
This is amazing!!
AveragePhotographer Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
atram95 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I'm Speechless!!
deepgrounduk Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016
amazing work :D
tubi4 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016
Great work :D
Brandoch-Daha Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Love it! Great light!
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